rough cut

this is our rough cut:

Test Footage

this is our test footage!

Target Audience

Target audience:

We have decided that our target audience for our film opening will be people in their late teens and twenty's. The reason that we chose this age group is that we think they are the people who would understand the film opening a lot better than people under or over the age group. Also This is the age group that could most relate to the characters involved in our opening sequence. For example, our protagonist is shown as a 'loner' in society who regularly gets picked on. People in their late teens and twenty's can relate to this as bullying often goes on in secondary school, and these people are more likely to remember. Our target audience is not a mainstream audience, as a British Social Realist drama would be shown in smaller independent cinemas. The story of this film would not suit mainstream cinemas.

Props:

• Toast
• Marmite
• Table
• Table cloth
• Toaster
• Milk
• Kitchen utensils

Locations:

• Grimy road
  
• Someones kitchen

Actors:

• One boy (Protagonist)
• Group of chavs (5-10)
• Mother?
• Father?

Costume:

• Protagonist -- Tatty, Average teenage clothes
• Chavs -- Trackies, Hoodies, Caps

Risk Assessment:

Call sheet:

We will be filming on Monday 23 February in a location we haven't decided.
We will be filming in the afternoon, from about two o'clock until it gets dark (about 5).
All members of our group will be needed for this duration and also our actors, although maybe they will only be needed at the end as that is only a part of our film.

Blog Feedback.

Positives:

• Very Well Organised
• Given Lots of pictures and videos to go with the writing
• Good demonstrations of ideas for ident
• I like the way you have made the company production thing. (pictures)
• Detailed pictures
• Good effort, taking nice pictures of set
• Mood board was brilliant! shows exactly what mood you want it in.
  

Improvements:

• No dates and times of shooting
• Needs more writing
• Only one analysis (WRONG WE HAVE TWO)
• Music is derivative.

What will we do in response to this?

• We will input our dates and times of recording.
• We will write more in our blog.
  
• We will make sure our music isn't derivative.

Why is it essential for us to receive feedback?

It is essential for us to receive feedback, because we can improve our planning grade, also it will keep us organized so we know what we are doing.


How does our current blog compare to our thriller blogs?

Our current blog is a lot more detailed than our thriller blog, it has a lot more images and analysises. we have managed to receive better feedback. we have a better idea of what we are going to do in our final shooting.